Wednesday, January 21, 2015
In this little video, four students were struggling for their book report. They all had different style of writing. Lucy was a girl who counted every word she wrote. It might help her finish the homework really quick. However, counting words might make the whole process of writing meaningless. It is because she was only trying to fill her book report with words, and the quality of the book report would be low. Schroeder was a boy who put a lot of plots into his book report. It might give the report many details, but he did not add his own views. Moreover, he also tried to connect his writing with many classic sentence structures, which had the same reason with Lucy's style -- reaching one hundred words. Linus was the most hard working student among the four. He read many books, and made comprehensive analysis about the book and its characters. He used abundant hard words , which made his book report more mature. Nonetheless, I think he overstated some of his point. As for Charlie Brown, he was the laziest one. He started writing his homework while others were almost done. I think this is not a good way of doing homework, because if you push everything to the last minute, you might not have time to revise your work. This could lead to plentiful problems in writing. I like Linus's writing style the most, for not only his excellent report, but also his careful attitude. He analyzed every character, and made deep thinking. However, his sentences were too long. He could separated them to some short sentences in older to make his book report less lengthy.
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