About My Lovely Camera and Thirty Days Challenge

Mr.Tree And Hat—13/30D'C

Saw—16/30D’C 

The Calendar—22/30D’C

30-Day Challenge—A Precious Page of My Life--30/30D'C

I chose the introduction before I started the challenge as my first work. Besides the last blog post, the rest of three are “Mr.Tree And Hat”, “Saw”, and “The Calendar”. First of all, there is one problem that appears in all of my writings— grammar mistakes. I still need to work on the tense of my sentences and the comma splices. Moreover, there are some words in the blogs that may not be appropriate enough. Therefore, I will recheck all of writings and replace some of words with those with more vivid and suitable meanings. Second of all, in “Saw”, I think some of the sentences need closer connections, and I amy also reinforce some transitions to make the story more attractive and interesting. Also, there are some details are needed to support my thesis or the personalities of my characters. At last, many of my writings reveal the problem of inadequate endings, so that I will try to make my endings more coherent in order to emphasis my main topic.